The bitch was right – #Writespiration


Writespiration – is a great challenge which I’m enjoying more each week.

The challenge is to write something using the weekly theme, in just 52 words…. EXACTLY 52 words, no more, no less. It’s harder than it seems, feel free to have a go yourself if you doubt me!

This week Sacha has given us the words the bitch was right to use in our post.  Here we go:

The bitch was right

The wound was still so raw

a throbbing, bleeding mess.

Inside his head their life in pictures

looped continually on repeat.

He didn’t understand the how or why.

Maybe the bitch was right to jilt him

On their wedding day.

He just wasn’t husband material

She knew the real him after all.

I seem to following a theme here and making a series which was completely unintentional at the beginning.  It’s now getting to be fun!

church, wedding, afternoon light

My previous offerings in this ‘series’ can be found here:

The Girl in the Black Hood

Backwards

I’ve also written an advert for my mother in 52 words

and The Switch was fun too, although my dark side seems to be emerging!

Are you keen to join in the fun of writing a story in just 52 words??  Give it a go and let me know what you come up with.

Deb 🙂

writespiration-2017

PS. You can also find Deb’s World here – I’d be delighted if you’d join me.

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  One thought on “The bitch was right – #Writespiration

  1. April 29, 2017 at 6:00 pm

    ooh! Great take Debbie!

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  2. April 29, 2017 at 7:17 pm

    Such language mother! Definitely turning into a series. Great to see a different side of your writing.

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  3. April 30, 2017 at 3:27 am

    I like the theme emerging here Debbie, it is compelling reading! 🙂

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    • April 30, 2017 at 9:20 pm

      Yes I agree, although I wonder where some of these ideas are coming from!! So is my daughter who is getting married soon, she’s a bit concerned. 🙂

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  4. April 30, 2017 at 10:47 am

    Bit of a wedding theme happening here… hope art is not going to reflect life. :0. Love the photo and the yellow light, I will try one of these out one day… and I am sure it is quite difficult. Maybe there is a crime fiction inside of you….. Louise

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    • April 30, 2017 at 9:26 pm

      I took that photo in Melbourne’s big church just recently Louise and thought it sited my post! Eliza is getting worried about my wedding theme and wonders where I’m going with it. I must admit I’m surprising myself too. I’m sure you’d enjoy the challenge too 🙂

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  5. April 30, 2017 at 2:32 pm

    This is turning into a great series Debbie. Can’t wait to find out what happens next.

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  6. mumsthewordblog1
    April 30, 2017 at 8:55 pm

    Great post.
    We’ve also nominated you for the Liebster Award. Check out our site for rules if you chose to participate. We are looking forward to reading more of your blogs!
    https://www.mumsthewordblog.com/2017/04/30/liebster-blog-award/
    😃🐻

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  7. robjodiefilogomo
    May 2, 2017 at 10:47 pm

    only 25 words???? Not sure I could do that—I go on, and on, and on….
    🙂
    Jodie

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  8. May 3, 2017 at 6:19 am

    Very cool!!

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    • May 3, 2017 at 5:41 pm

      Glad you like it, I’m enjoying myself.

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  9. lsgaitan23
    May 3, 2017 at 6:28 am

    I think this was brilliant!

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    • May 3, 2017 at 5:40 pm

      Haha!! Thanks a lot 🙂 It’s brought out my dark side that’s for sure.

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  10. May 3, 2017 at 7:07 am

    A few things, first off amazing piece, as always. Your writing never fails to fill me with chills and thrills! Two, this challenge sounds quite fun! After completing the A to Z I’ve suddenly forgotten how to find my own inspiration?! This would be quite helpful, I can’t wait to play along!

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    • May 3, 2017 at 5:37 pm

      I really appreciate your thoughts on my blog and my writing. I do enjoy it and try to have fun. Your A-Z was an amazing challenge and I applaud your for getting through it. I’m sure you’ll find inspiration somewhere and if you feel like taking on this challenge I’m sure you’d enjoy it and do really well.

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  11. May 3, 2017 at 9:45 am

    I feel bad for the poor guy. Hopefully, he gets his revenge in an upcoming story. 🙂

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    • May 3, 2017 at 5:22 pm

      Me too Austin, I don’t know what’s going to happen next either – it all depends on Sacha’s next prompt.

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  12. May 3, 2017 at 10:04 am

    Beautifully written

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    • May 3, 2017 at 5:04 pm

      Thanks very much Mandi! It’s been a fun challenge to do.

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  13. May 3, 2017 at 10:02 pm

    I love that they are continuing in the same theme, I think this is going to end up as a full length story, I am excited for you 😀

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    • May 3, 2017 at 10:05 pm

      I’m a bit worried about this week’s prompt though!! You’ve got me thinking 😊

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      • May 3, 2017 at 10:07 pm

        haha, well they aren’t always easy to fit into the same theme – hopefully most weeks will be bendable. Perhaps not this naughty one though :p

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  14. May 4, 2017 at 8:24 am

    Such universal truth in 52 words. I am going to look for this next week!

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    • May 5, 2017 at 7:22 pm

      Haha, it’s a fun challenge for sure!

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  15. May 4, 2017 at 9:29 pm

    Well done – just 52 words is a tough challenge!

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    • May 5, 2017 at 7:24 pm

      Thanks, you’re right it is a tough challenge, but it’s been good to think outside the square.

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